Toxic Rain Book Two in the George 'MAC' McClain Series Volume 2 Will Decker 9781492946434 Books
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When MAC comes to the aid of a beautiful young woman trying to stop the evil corporate thugs that killed her boyfriend, an enterprising young scientist that developed a toxin with the potential to kill off mankind, MAC might be in over his head. But the stakes have never been higher when failure could mean the end of the human race. Follow along this fast paced Action/Thriller while MAC takes on corporate greed, assassins, and the love of a beautiful woman. Is MAC's reputation for the love of fine rum and finer women in jeopardy?
Toxic Rain Book Two in the George 'MAC' McClain Series Volume 2 Will Decker 9781492946434 Books
fantastic book Will , cant seem to put it down. Full of suspence with some steamy portions thrown in to inhances the book even more.Cant wait to start the next in the next oneProduct details
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Toxic Rain Book Two in the George 'MAC' McClain Series Volume 2 Will Decker 9781492946434 Books Reviews
So, while I didn't find the story interesting, I did find it brimming with errors. Here are some samples, and you can see a lot of these just by looking at the sample offered through .
“…sharp blue eyes that can cause a women’s hart to flutter.” (should be cause a woman's heart to flutter)
“…the man being a relatively new client that came highly recommended by so not quite reliable sources.” (maybe it should be some not-quite reliable?)
“…he needed hard cash money for the parts.” (where are the commas? or a hyphen? - hard cash money)
A semicolon that separates a dependent and independent clause. (multiple times)
Excessively wordy sentences…words everywhere that aren’t needed.
“…there’s a loud blast and the flare of a shot like lightening in the dark of night.”
Bar-top? It is just bar top.
“…slipping the knife back into its sheathe.” Should be sheath (noun)…sheathe is a verb.
“Smiling back at her, I open the rear door…” switched to 1st person, when the story is in third person. Should say “Mac” opened the door or “he” opened the door.
Switches between present and past tense a lot.
Commas used poorly, and some that are misplaced. (too many to count)
Repetition of phrases/words. Example Uses “high rate of speed” twice in back-to-back paragraphs.
The Dentist’s nightmare “Still groggy from having impacted his head with the steering wheel,…”
As an optimist by nature, this is as close to a 1-star review as I have ever given, and I will never read anything else from this author.
Mac likes his rum but it doesn't keep him from doing what has to be done. He's a down to earth person that you can relate to. Has his ups and down but who hasn't. Great book.
fantastic book Will , cant seem to put it down. Full of suspence with some steamy portions thrown in to inhances the book even more.Cant wait to start the next in the next one
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